In this video, I'll be editing and rating two more of your common app essays (again)!!! Be sure to watch all the way through because the second essay is has tons of common mistakes that we can all learn from! Thanks so much for trusting me with your work! If you're curious to know when we'll be doing something like this again, be sure to SUBSCRIBE and keep an eye out on our community posts where we announce when we'll be doing free edits again!

Time Stamps
0:00 Intro
1:52 Common App #11
10:24 Common App #12
17:54 Rating Your Essays!

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ABOUT US
Hi! We're Kevin and Jeffrey, two Yalies who want to help you get into your dream school!

About Kevin Zhen: Exeter '16, Yale '20 (East Asian Studies)
Since 2016, Kevin has personally helped more than 50+ students gain acceptances into every Ivy League University, as well as top tech schools such as Stanford and Georgia Tech. He also loves teaching creative nonfiction, flash fiction and poetry. In total, his students have won more than 120+ Scholastic Writing awards.

About Jeffrey Yu: Yale '23 (Computer Science and East Asian Studies)
Jeff is a senior at Yale double majoring in Computer Science and East Asian Studies with a concentration on China. His college admissions essay was featured in the New York Times, and he specializes in essay writing, college admissions strategy, and life coaching. He has served as a Student Ambassador to the Yale Admissions Office, written extensively about college admissions on Quora and has taught courses on motivation, passion, and leadership while sponsored by the US Embassy in Tokyo.

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