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In this video, I cover the six most common first chapter mistakes that I see new fantasy writers make - and I provide solutions for crafting better opening hooks and chapters in your story.

⏲️ TIMESTAMPS:
00:00 - Introduction
00:19 - Sloppy prose
07:15 - No USP
11:34 - Starting too early
13:08 - Meaningless action
16:36 - False promises
20:51 - Worldbuilding overload

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🧑 ABOUT ME:
Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer.

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